hello
I started creating my shop:
http://www.patrickcollections.kingeshop.com
if you could give me a first opinion
it would be nice and do not hesitate to criticize
since the goal of the game is to improve
empty pages are not visible
I need time
thank you in advance
Sincerely
Patrick

Author	:	patrick
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Creation	:	2010-08-10

passionbijo said ...

Hi Patrick, I love the black and white that gives the impression of old products, however, the color of your text hinder the readability of the homepage.


www.passionbijou.com

2010-08-12

Patrick said ...

hello
thank you for your reply
I tried to do some tests
to change the color but it is not apparent
I veraison not well if I can find a solution
The basic idea is to start my sales
then I shall have time to make any changes
sincere greetings
Patrick

2010-08-12

koumy said ...

Hello
It is not wicked but usually curious. .. I is not beyond the home page.

The photo is a blurred black and white is not really an invitation to go further, if you were a beautiful picture clearer. .... and stay in tone and style of departure. ....!!!

The text Small dots of color, it does. ... bad marriage. ... it is quite frankly kid or tasteless .... I do not know but this does not always.

Tip: opt for simplicity, a black and white old: choose a writing Glossary scritp or gray background with a very clear or white, white case .... and of course black writing

I confess not to have been later because the first page does not drawn to push further forward

Courage. , Simplicity and good continuation

2010-08-13

SergeD said ...

Hi Patrick,
I agree with the koumy, your homepage does not really want to go further, and if you want to start your sales must be tempting your window, a website is like a store, if you have a nice window with products with a beautiful decoration, you want to go inside. I would put several old postcards and other products, because the one you have there is too distorted and you could put text between the dark products, which would avoid the red not very readable

Cordially

2010-08-14

Patrick said ...

hello
thank you for your comments
criticism is useful, I thought the card
as wallpaper illustrated the subject but not practical
to insert, enlarging as it was deformed
I hesitated between this and a mix of several objects
various
I'll edit this when I have a little time
Sincerely
Patrick

2010-08-14

Patrick said ...

hello
I missed a question in my answer
for kumiss: What is scritp Glossary
font style? and how does one recognize
a font is French?
Sincerely
Patrick

2010-08-14

Patrick said ...

hello
I have to redo the page
it is not clear
I have chosen to police novel
with the images is not easy
focus for all
for the fact that the page takes place
this will help me when all categories
be online
good late afternoon
Sincerely
Patrick

2010-08-14

SergeD said ...

Re hello,

I saw your new home page is already much better, your photos are of excellent quality

Good luck for the future
Cordially

2010-08-14

Patrick said ...

hello
thank you for the compliment
is ultimately more simple
and better
have a great evening
Sincerely
Patrick

2010-08-14

Patrick said ...

hello
just a passing word
I just had my domain name:
www.patrickcollections.com
Sincerely
Patrick

2010-08-14

koumy said ...

Hello

I have not yet been seen ty change but I wanted to tell you: good luck my friend! ¥ kingeshopeur!

I go to see your website tomorrow

Bye

2010-08-14

Patrick said ...

hello
thank you koumy
and good luck to you too
Sincerely
Patrick

2010-08-14

Thierry said ...

Your site link does not work!

2010-08-14

CréaStyx said ...

Hello

I'm starting here (for 3 days)

Do not worry, the link works now, it had to be activated ...

If I may ...
If your site offers mostly antiques (I understand), why not put your site in shades of brown and make a cameo later by changing the color of fonts?
I find that blue is really flashy!
(You should see what you propose further later)

For all your items, even if you do not choose the colors brown, it might be preferable not to put all the text bold? Put the title and possibly some key words but all the text, it is aggressive, even more than now it's black!

Oops by clicking Profile: P does not appear, there is a kind of image dépixelisée

Courage Courage!
There are so many things to do at the beginning!

2010-08-15

Patrick said ...

hello
the site is fully accessible Mails
http://www.patrickcollections.com/
sorry for the links for the moment I do not know
not sure how it is
I simply copy / paste!
CréaStyx if I chose to remove the wallpaper
and do not put color on it because the opinion
some of the texts were difficult to read
in profile although there was a small image, I do not know where it comes
but I just delete it
I put a little less fat is an idea to remember
I do not actually sell that old things I will add them gradually
I created a forty classes the idea is to turn but the pages remain empty
Then I'll be having articles on my favorite subjects because before being a business is primarily a passion (postcards, stamps, genealogy and old papers ..)
complete all and all a good Sunday
Sincerely
Patrick

2010-08-15

koumy said ...

Hello

Well there is that I was a pleasure without limits that come and go on the website www.patrickcollections,

1) a nice home, who, then cool any more the tone of products sold

2) your headings are clear and well written

3) the presentation of products is impeccable

However. There is nothing small correction:

4) your page Help section contains spelling errors (it's a kingeshopeuse we drew on detailed exact)

5) shipping your page, you bet. R1 and R2, I think it would be nice to put a small notr explanatory: the client (where it is, and all ages) who comes to your website must be clear and complete information Specifically, at no time he must wonder: What is this? And leave your website by saying: I will seek elsewhere what the acronyms mean and I will return
Everything must be simple, clear, explained = your customer comes in, click the right or left, but he has no other alternative (if he has the means and he has found the desired object) than buying online, IN YOU! For all your work has been done to follow this path and that there can be a grain of sand in this well oiled machine for SALE!

5) your page Terms of sale: the paragraph is indented, is done knowingly? If so why not fill these voids by some photos of your products.

That is, for me, but your work has paid dearly kingeshopeur, your site is well done, I wish you good sales.

2010-08-15

koumy said ...

Re hello

6) Your profile page is in my opinion a bit bare: Complements there. In some images of your product, the paragraphs are well written, each page has not forgotten you must convince the customer to seduce him, and do not let him relax, he comes to you .... is that he has a passion for this kind of products and typically, he made several Web site before or after will make others. .... and on this last point. ... KINGESHOPEUR this is that you should win ha ha ha

Bye Bye

2010-08-15

Claudine said ...

Hello

You've named your categories according to the code of products in the past, I do not think this is a good choice to promote your listing, it would be better to write a postcard or postcard landscape color etc. ..
You could also, for referencing, support and develop descriptions of your products.
You do that seven key words, is it enough? even if they are relevant .. (And separate your keywords with commas ..)

I also like Créastyx, blue not very harmonious with the banner and with the old spirit which must result from your site, but it's still a matter of taste.

Beautiful photos on your home page on which you could put a link to the items or the relevant heading.

Well I'll stop there, there is work, but courage kingeshoppeur friend!

Good day
Cordially
Claudine

2010-08-15

Cly said ...

The link does not work

2010-08-15

Patrick said ...

hello
thank you for your compliments and comments
for koumy no it is not the robot R2D2
recommended but it's true that I should
noted; for help I read that there were mistakes
I will correct them as soon as I have a little time
I mounted this in a week and it's far from finished
it is expected images; complements in the text ..
for Claudine: on the titles of categories I have not much choice
we are limited in number and more impossible to make a long title
number of departments before a D is voluntary for those who
doing research, it prevents them from ending up with the list with all
cards that have the same number
Cly for: this is not a link (I do not know them) but just copy / paste
Sincerely
Patrick

2010-08-15

Patrick said ...

hello
How do you remove the stripe
top and left?
I thought it was parameterized as well but I saw
in stores it was not
thank you in advance
Sincerely
Patrick

2010-08-17

CréaStyx said ...

Sorry,
I do not see what you mean!

Ever yours,

2010-08-17

Patrick said ...

hello
there on my homepage left
there appear classes or a color band
idem just below the logo
in other shops I saw she was not
so we must be able to delete or modify
have a nice day
Sincerely
Patrick

2010-08-17

CréaStyx said ...

Hello!

I wanted to go see your site to see exactly what you're talking about but it is inaccessible for the moment ...
I'll see later ...

Is not this the design you have chosen for your page that does this?
Maybe he should change it to remove what you're talking!

Ever yours,

2010-08-17

Patrick said ...

hello
thank you for your reply
it is the model chosen which
I have these borders
I just make the change
Sincerely
Patrick

2010-08-18

delf said ...

hello patrick,

I have not read all the comments about you and maybe this has already been said and I'm sorry if this is the case.

Tip for not losing the quality of a photo on home page or section: click on the picture and click on size.
Then in the rule format.

Delphine of bébés fringueurs

2010-08-18

Patrick said ...

hello
thank you for the info
spend a good evening
Sincerely
Patrick

2010-08-19